How come i can't have slopped supporting walls ? I spoke to my mate last night and he is a builder and it is possible to do this
You can have what you like, but you will have problems in detailing and constructing the wall/roof junction for uplift, fixing and damp ingress. That's why a flat roof has the kind of edge detail it has, and not a sloping wall.
You obviously can't have a ventilated roof with that idea, so it will be a warm deck. And you don't seem to have allowed for the depth including the insulation - which will also affect your planning submission for the eaves height and total height.
And are you sure that the joist and beam section sizes are adequate for those spans? They seem not to be deep enough.
And you are also working to a minimum slope. With large spans like that, the roof deck tends to sag, so if you don't increase the slope and beef up the timber sections to compensate, you end up with a nice pond on the roof.