Just to clarify, your drawing shows 125mm reinforced slab on top of the concrete, I guess you are doing that so the underfloor heating clips to the slab, then you can have relatively thin layer of liquid screed on the slab so a bonded screed.
Your idea for the doors sounds OK, are you having the patio flush to the doors etc, so no door call, if so you need a threshold ACO drain. If you are having bifols doors make sure the bottom weather seal works well