From what you've described, the survey findings don't automatically suggest a serious structural problem. Two raised slates, a couple of cracked corners, and a localized uneven area on a natural slate roof are often signs of installation or finishing issues rather than evidence of roof-frame movement or major defects.
One thing that stands out is that the surveyor appears to have assumed the property was older and that the roof was made from artificial slate. If that's the case, some of the comments and recommendations may be based on a misunderstanding of the property's age and roofing material. Surveyors also tend to be cautious and frequently recommend a roof inspection whenever they identify any visible imperfections.
That said, it would still be sensible to have the builder explain why those specific slates are raised and whether the uneven section is purely cosmetic or requires adjustment. Getting that response in writing would provide extra reassurance before completing the purchase.
An independent slate roofing specialist could also give a more objective assessment. Contractors such as Covenant Roofing & Restoration regularly inspect slate roofs and can help identify whether issues are cosmetic, installation-related, or something more significant. You can
discover more about the types of slate roof concerns professionals typically evaluate.
Overall, the report sounds more consistent with localized workmanship concerns than a major structural issue.